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Meowing on a Fence

The mad chit chats
Of mad cats
Keeps the world up late

Yet if there was nothing special
to embelish with thought

They wouldn't stare at the fading moon
At unholy hours, but to them so soon

Believing it all to be a fluke

And everyone else throws a boot at those
Poor Cats

The interventionists of common ideals
They don't realize what appeals

But a bodily bruise heals

And so they stay up
Bringing tranquility to themselves
and sleep deprivation to all others

Author notes

I. Don't. Even. Know.

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  • seven
    October 15, 2008

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    you don't know? Are you saying you don't know what your own poem is about, or that you don't know why you wrote it that way?

    I thought I understood the poem until I read that.

    What I thought I understood, I liked, however.

    • Cheesy Poof
      October 16, 2008
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      sorry, it was late and I didn't know why I was procrastinating by writing a poem instead of doing my work