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I am here to love you
To love you and to want you
To need you and to feel you
To touch you and to be with you
I love you in the morning and
In the middle of the day
In the hours we are together
And in the hours you are away
I love the old and the new
The sunlight and the shade
The warmth and the cool
The smiles and the tears
For it is only because of you
That any of these things exist for me
You see
I found new meaning in all things
When I met you

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  • Unforgotten
    October 30, 2008

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    i like it

    nice--pleasant--not too heavey handed. these 'you changed my life' poems are usually tired... you pulled it off nicely

  • headintheclouds
    October 15, 2008

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    This reminds me of that song that my mother sang to me it went "Ill love you in the morning and in the afternoon Ill love you in the evening underneath th moon" I really like this poem! Good Write! Good luck in my contest