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Each Breath

Lost in a world that doesn't exist..
I wander alone, cold, beaten, afraid
Insecure, uncertain, paranoid, and insane
Demons closing in my spirit's in flames
The Devils persuasions calling my name
Causing
Intoxicating images, distorted views
Warped visions infecting the truth
Replacing the boundaries of everything I once knew
Wearily I struggle worn out and so drained
It seems I've forgotten what happiness is in the midst's of misery and pain..... memories are like agony flowing through each of my veins.....leaking out of each pore.....flooding my senses and decaying my core.....I am now rotten, spoiled, diseased inside.....soul sickness plaguing my mind.....making every breath that I take a sorrowful sigh

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