((His name is Derick, his nickname Shade.)not part of the poem.)
He made me so happy,
I laughed more that summer,
I was ready for anything.
He held me tightly,
made me believe!
I left everything,
I hung my worries at the door,
I gave him everything,
my all.
He made me so happy.
He used to make me happy,
even a thought made me grin...
...smile!
I wasn't on guard anymore.
Then...
Why did it go so wrong?
What happened!
He just changed,
he just changed...
There wasn't anything I could do.
He tore me up,
my heart was shattered
when he told me he couldn't love me,
not anymore.
Not anymore?
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having a broken heart
im going to type it up, but i wanted to enter before it closed.
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- How can you mend a broken heart by rainyday woman.
875 points, ended October 15, 2008, 27 entries
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Thanks very much for entering this contest. You did a wonderful piece with the prompt given and I really enjoyed reading it. Again thank you for entering
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