I just wanna say thank you For Never Giving Up
And going out of your way just for it to be enough
I just wanna say thank you for changing my life around
Changing my face always to a smile instead of the frown
I just wanna say thank you for always caring and loving me for me
And not just for some toy like the other guys seem to think
Your my best friend and that will never change
Although in public you act a bit strange
But thats why i love you, Ill love you till the end
I wanna say thank you, for being my best friend
You been there for me through the good times and hard
Im there beside your heart, trying to guard
Ill be here for you always, you can always count on that
Because thats what girls do when they need to have girl chat
Ill give you my shouler to cry on any time you need
And thats why our friendship will always suceed
Because you love me and i love you with all of my heart
I know your there to help and not tear it apart
I just wanna say thank you For Never Giving Up
And going out of your way just for it to be enough
I just wanna say thank you for changing my life around
Changing my face always to a smile instead of the frown
I just wanna say thank you for always caring and loving me for me
And not just for some toy like the other guys seem to think
A contest entry
- Be that Smile in someone's life! by Tom The Invader.
625 points, ended November 21, 2008, 13 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Awwww
That is so sweetly adorable and so lovely to see such loyalty, for your friend supporting you and your inspired poem for your friend. Wonderfully done.
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Heart Touching
We all forget to sat Thank you and this poem reminds me to say thank you to thiose that really care and have made a diference in our lives like just making us smile
This a powerful poem and wrtten in such a simple matter
"I just wanna say thank you For Never Giving Up "
So very often we give up on ourselves, but its our frinds the true and real ones that never Give up on us in the long run
A self lesson within a beautiful poem
Thank you for sharing
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This is such an amazing write! wow. Im sure you touched your best friends heart deeply. I know that my best friend has been there for me through everything, High school was definatly tough, but we've survived! Great job, your rhyming was good too!
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That was so beautiful. Really awesome. It brought a tear to my eye. I really do like it. It's amazing.
Breathtaking. I'm rather speachless. The flow and rhythem and rhyme was amazingly perfect. I loved how you repeated the beginning at the end!! -
I imagine that the person for whom you've written this must have been truly touched by it. It is a sweet piece. If the punctuation and capitalization were more consistent, it would improve the piece quite a bit, but that's just my opinion.
Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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This is great
Good Job here. I really like this poem! Nice write! Good luck and thank you for entering my contest!(: -
Wow this is touching. And don't listen to Poe. Rhyming is fine if you can do it, and you most definately can. Well done!
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good expression but its a little choppy, lacking in flow a bit.
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it ryhmes...
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a heart felt write, i wanna say that girl chat is very important too, though some guys don't go for it, they can learn a lot if they listen to it. thanks for entering.
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