Closet theologians pornicating ideas
like amped up hares
trapped in the spin cycle of life.
("no need for softener,
but be sure to bleach the bones.")
Their discourse leads eraticly into:
Irony Was Born Early
Even angels get high.
Aetheral escape,
I guess the responsiblities of wings is a b*tch.
Don’t drop a dime,
but Jesus wasn’t the pusher man,
just a mule.
It was Solomon, Moses, Judas,
you know
THAT crowd.
And Lucifer too.
Masterminds I tell ya,
but why the cretan’s greed laden need
to defile belief into a control tool ?
Given the thread to life
and we foolishly entangle the spool.
Let’s go down by the tracks
and “watch the earthworms quake” -
Swallowers of small packages in large boxes.
Author notes
prompt 11 ask for random word, pic.... I recieved Laundry-mat.
and thus was what tumbled forth... LOL
lets go down by the tracks
and watch the earthworms quake
swallower of small packages in large boxes -
we are all worm food no matter how superior we think we are
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Closet theologians pornicating ideas
like amped up hares
trapped in the spin cycle of life.
Irony Was Born Early
Even angels get high.
Aetheral escape,
I guess the responsiblities of wings is a b*tch.
clever.blunt. and oh so dam lovely
Don’t drop a dime,
but Jesus wasn’t the pusher man,
just a mule.
It was Solomon, Moses, Judas,
you know
THAT crowd.
And Lucifer too.
I love the way you word things, write
like, I can hear someone SAYING the words
if that makes sense??
accidental rhyme <3
Let’s go down by the tracks
and “watch the earthworms quake” -
Swallowers of small packages in large boxes.
intriguing. explain it in greater detail?
thanks and goodluck!
I already love how you have used the prompt <3
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thanks for the bounty of gold, care to co host a pif with it?
and yes it makes perfect sense. i write it as the muse speaks it. I appreciate the way you fully delved into this. Have a groovy eve.
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