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dawn

Tommorow dawns
Awakening light sorrow
Longing among leaven trails
Frigid hollows and empty words
Etched upon memory

A slate never cleaned.


B.L.House 2008


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  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    Poignant and bittersweet
    Very fine writing, my friend
    Take care,
    Sandy