Look to me and I will fail, talk to me with no avail,
Always frightened, always running,
look behind me, nothing coming,
Depend on me you'll go awry, rely on me and you will die,
Always fearing, always hiding,
always silent, not confiding.
Fearing what things have to be, fearing what it is to be me.
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Written January 27th, 2004
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Hey Dil! Thanks for reading and commenting hunni! Yeah this is my real name, my pronunciation is "Fray-uh" I've never heard of it pronounced the other way? Maybe it's becoz I'm from the states you never know.
Freya xxx
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Yet another awesome poem from Freya! (is that your name? and do you pronounce it "Fray-uh" or "Fry-uh"? cuz I have a friend who has the same spelling and you say it "Fry-uh"....ah. just wondering. anyway...)
This is very poignant. You have this amazing ability to communicate real emotion into words without rambling and being confusing ( i know i have that problem). I love reading your work~ Keep writing!
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WOW!
As always your write is very emotional. You have a great talent for putting to words what many feel. And such few words are used. Your rhyming is your best gift. It not often you find a poet who can pack such a powerful punch in so few words with a rhyme to boot. Thank you for sharing your wroks with all of us. I look forward as alwasy to reading more. -
oooooo wow, dis good *does a little dance* Well done!! I like the rhyme within the lines .
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Well said Freya. You explained being frightened well here. It's short but to the point. Thanks for sharing! I'll be sure to check out more of your works as soon as I have time.
~dark
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