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How Not To Be At Last

Alone again
Making it on my own
At first it was hard
But now I'm use to it you know

I opened myself up
To get hurt once again
It will be a while
Before ill turn to another man

Hes in my dreams
He taunts me there you know
When im alone hes the shadow
That just wont let me go

I try to forget
To get it back to the way it was
Before I had met him
I was ok then because

I didnt have to fight
Or have to shead a tear
I didnt have to bow down
Or dread  and even fear

But now its all over
The times have now passed
And what have i learned
How not to be at last.

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