Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Stupid You

You promised me a togetherness forever
And when I needed you the most
You walked away...

I got a few little words for you,
I'm tired of this shit!
I'm tired of your stupid lies
The stupid tears I cried!
I hate those stupid butterflies
That seemed stuck in my stomach.
All those stupid wishes
On dead dandilions.
I hate those stupid little hearts
On ever piece of paper.
Stupid love,
Stupid you.

Thanks to you
I know the difference between
Holding hands and falling in love.
I know kisses don't always mean something
And promises can be broken.
Thanks to you
I've learned that goodbye really means
Forever.

I knew you were nothing more than hopeless
And yet I still gave you a fucking chance.
I hate that I fell for your little lie
And believed your "baby I love you."

I gave you my heart
And you ripped it to pieces
Now I'm gonna tear you apart
With a chainsaw!
Watch me screw this shit
And burn the memories
Cause you're nothing more than a waste of my heart!

Low life scum get more respect than you
You don't deserve to lick dirt off my shoes.
God made a mistake when he created you
Hell, you're a waste of sperm too!

Watch me fuck your buddies
Every day and night.
Trash your apartment
Just for fucking fun.
Get all my girls to call you up
Then fucking cuss you out
Like the little bitch you are!

I wanna let you know
That I've seen bigger.
That shirt I always said looked hot
Made you look trashy.
And that stupid love song
I never really liked.
You smell like ass
And you taste like cheep liquor.
I sorry but I just don't have enough room in life
For you and my viborator.
Screw this shit
I can do better!

I thought we were like Romeo and Juliet
And we'd do anything for each other,
But Romeo didn't break Juliet's heart.

Some day you'll cry over me
Like I cried over you.
Some day you'll miss me
Like I missed you.
Some day you'll need me
Like I needed you.
Some day you'll love me
But I won't love you.

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • PerfectImperfection
    October 31, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    A very intense sequence of emotion. Pained and filled with such hatred for the deception granted. I think we all have these thoughts when the one we thought we were meant to be with, just dissolves. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes!


  • mamaliz23
    October 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    wow you just nailed how i feel right now too. I love this poem, and every single word just hit hard. very good write, good luck in the contest. we are in it together

  • Writing0Freedom
    October 14, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    The pain here is written in such an intensely raw way. That is a lot of emotion you got out and it is a really really strong write! Well done, nice write. I like the part 'But Romeo didn't break Juliets heart'
    WritingFree