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Help Me

I see you with them

All alone i stand

with my eyes watering up

I whisper "come be with me"

Those you stand with

only do bad things to me

They hit tease and bite

Their words hurt most

they say you use me

they say you don't love me

that you want me to die

I feel bad that i make you feel that way

I'm left out...

Out of your life

Please tell me i'm over reacting

You smile at me and walk away from your friend

You pull me into a strong but gentle hug

kissing my forehead you tell me i look beautiful

That's when i feel loved,

no longer alone

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Cicada

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  • careless courtney
    October 27, 2008

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    that was really good! Its really cool how well the poem flows, and how easiley i can understand it! (there may be a 1st there...) but like menoemo, i think u should change the color too...its hard to read...


  • SmartBrick
    October 20, 2008

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    OMG!I LOOOOOOOOVe the bg!AWESOME1I loved this poem and everything about it!Please change font color so I can read it better!

    ♥MeNoEmo♥


  • Lost in a Dreamstar
    October 16, 2008
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    I loved it! Esactlly what I want!(sorry on my spelling!)