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Both of You

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Devastation; lay in front of you,
neither man nor beast does live
Shreds of life lay on the ground,
not caring if they forgive

The silvery moon does call to you,
telling you of change
From teeth to fangs, hair to fur,
till no human form remains

You hunt the night to slaughter,
your butchery reigns supreme
Destroyer of both friend and foe,
brought forth by nightly beams

To lie in wait would do you ill,
the hunt is what you seek
Then chase them down to terrify,
and torture all the weak

A monster; you did not begin,
but now hell lives in your soul
It drives you to vengeful life,
which you, have no control

The stench of death hangs deep on you,
you taste the rotting flesh
You fear to see the morning light,
lingering memories that you catch

The face you wear to greet the day,
you can’t still call your own
For when you look deep in the mirror,
YOU; are not alone



Author notes

Staring at the carnage, praying that the sun would never rise.
Living another day in disguise.

~M.I.A. by Avenged Sevenfold: art Werewolf_by_pmoodie atdeviantart.com (Bosiarbooger)

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  • ennovy silver member
    March 4

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    Love the picture, the poetry is dark & enchanting....excellent writing..........thank you for entering...Novy & Brazos


  • Night Terrors
    February 26
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    great job this is really a great poem thanks for entering


  • snakeprincess742
    February 2
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    ohhhhhh nice one i loved it an the pic kep it up


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    January 19
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    awesome right, and so love your work , ty for sharin


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    Love the ending! Chilling write with superb imagery! All the best in the contest


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    October 15, 2008

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    I love your take on this prompt. Definately not what I had expected. Great job!

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 15, 2008

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    Wow, this is such a great interpretation
    of this picture my friend! I love how
    you brought it to life through your words
    here. Well done and good luck to you!




    Jeremy0826


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    good on ya I reckon that I'll probably have nightmares now Great take on the prompt and good luck in this contest


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 15, 2008
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    Oh and we need your name in the AN please

  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Oh my I did like the ending to this! Gives a real punch to the whole piece!
    Great imagery, flow and rhyme to this.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene

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