my tears
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
..out of my eyes
streaming my face with lines
that make me look like a clown.
staining my pillow in the process,
each of these little black lines
they tell a story ...
like why doesnt my dad care?..
So heres one of ur chances christina
i'll come there
stay for a lil while
and escape this bullshit and
~c~
~h~
~a~
~o~
~s~
maybe go back to half way normal...
i use to keep everything bottled up tight
and never let anything out..
now everything is
*c*
*r*
*a*
*s*
*h*
*i*
*n*
*g*
DOWN!
i cant stop it.
i need to just forget everything and not
want to know why dad doesnt care and is never here...
i should just stop trying to
U
N
D
E
R
S
T
A
N
D
everything i shouldn't...but i cant stop now..
it was part of mme
for
so
LONG
that i cant not
{wonder}
now...
but maybe i should just give up..
and christina i will keep my promise to not do u know what today.
but it will always linger in my mind,
and all the while i will be asking myself
-why?-
Author notes
i having a bad day and everything is going wrong way..so ya
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Comments
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love the style. very sad, but great write.
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awww i'm so sorry that you feel this way if it's based on the feelings you have, i've been here before.
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I really enjoyed your poem
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Nice style Sad poem ya, love the emotions. Hope all's well
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thank you
ya i just kind try not to let it bother me lol thanks
-lindsay
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i love the poem, dont worry it happens to us all and its all pretty shit ai. but it has to get better sometime soon! i can relate though. im fighting with my family they hurt me. hopefully everything looks up soon!
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aww ..thanks for the comment! i hope they get better for u t
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awww babe! i love you so fuck much! thanks 4 keeping your promise btw and omg i so wish i could send you a plane ticket or steal you away from there 4 alil bit! and if your dad is being an ass its his loss bcuz u are an amazing person! btw i love this form of this poem and it was nice to see my name in there! love you so much
-christina
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i love u to sweetie and ya y wldnt i keep my promise to u? ur the bestest friend ever..and can cheer me up like no other!! i wish i cld fly out there to! but ya love u so much and thanks
-lindsay xoxoxoxo -
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awwww!ur my best friend too! i love you so much, n ur welcome
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