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The Road to Xianaria

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For the road to Xianaria
    is both a wondrous and painful journey ~

From the moment we are born,
    we are destined to take our first steps

    down this path...

For some,

    the journey comes easy,
    as they are guided from early childhood
    by mentors who know the way.

For others...

Some wander aimlessly,
    seeking alternate paths.


For them,

    the path is not easy ~
    their journey is marked by the ruins
    of personal failures and pains -
    some brought upon by personal life choices,
    and some brought on by others.

Regardless of life's
 many directions,
    it matters not what we go through ~
    for all is worth the cost if we find ourselves

    at the gates of this great and wonderful place.

 

 

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Username: Xianaria

The road to Xianaria is life's spiritual journey.

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  • sunoir
    October 26, 2008

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    Nice

    Sometimes I've found a pick axe a couple sticks of dynamite and a jackhammer come in handy I know this road *S*


  • DolceVito gold member
    October 26, 2008
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    Excellent

    An excellent, well-crafted write, deserving


  • ScarletO gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    I am impressed with the feel of the intellect that is written in such a compassionate manner. The path is not always easy and it is a hit and miss, but mostly we deny what we truly wish for thinking it is unworthy. That is my opnion. Life is not easy and to find the right path that makes us feel like home is where we all wish to be. A lovely poem full of wisdom.


  • sheltered
    October 14, 2008

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    A word I have never heard before
    that one would be happy
    to truly find it's meaning.
    May you be there.