Wanting
Dreaming
Dreams show wants
They show our deepest desires
They can control our lives
And twist out fates
For the better
And for the worse
We can always count on dreams
Life=Dreams
These clouds we see
When darkness falls
Brings smiles to our faces
Smiles of the future
The clock is ticking
Every second matters
Hurry up now
Life your life
They way it is in your dreams
Author notes
"Before its too late, live the life you dreamed of"
My name is DancingWings (a.k.a. Sydney)
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie; Prompts by letters to no one.
625 points, ended October 15, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Tremendously uplifting! I really liked this piece...nice to have an upper once in a while
My favorite lines,
Life your life
They way it is in your dreams
Wonderful write!
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i really like the first stanza and the line that said
"And twists our fate" that is a really beautiful poem!!!!!!!!
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Super amazzing!!!
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