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The Mirror

mirror mirror on the wall
whos that girl
whos ready to fall

shes skin and bones
ripped and scared
who only cries and groans

mirror mirror on the wall
if only that girl
knew who to call

shes a beautiful diaster
who will never see her prince
or have a happily ever after

mirror mirror on the wall
whos that girl who cannot walk
but has to crawl

her body is weak
her soul she wishes
not to keep

mirror mirror on the wall
could i have saved this girl
before she lost it all
.
.
.
mirror mirror on the wall
save me
before i lose it all

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did my muse come back?

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  • BlackBloodyRose
    October 15, 2008
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    i love it. the last three lines the most. very good