Is there a way,
Another way-
To be friends
Without fighting?
Is there a way,
Another way-
To have peace
Without war?
Is there a way,
Another way-
To live my life
Without anger?
Is there a way,
Another way-
Another door?
CHORUS:
Why does life have to be
So complicated?
Why can’t I do
As I please?
Why is life so
Sophisticated?
Do I have to go down
On my knees?
Is there a way,
Another way-
To be happy
Without sorrow?
Is there a way,
Another way-
For the bad not to come
With the good?
Is there a way,
Another way-
To have love
Without hatred?
Is there a way,
Another way-
I think there should.
CHORUS:
Why does life have to be
So complicated?
Why can’t I do
As I please?
Why is life so
Sophisticated?
Do I have to go down
On my knees?
Is there a way,
Another way-
To be friends
Without fighting?
Is there a way,
Another way-
To have peace
Without war?
Is there a way,
Another way-
To live my life
Without anger?
I’m looking for a way,
Another way-
Another door.
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Comments
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Beautiful, I think it has a strong message, and I like how you made it a song... It flows very nicely... Excellent write!!!!!!
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Absolutely brilliantly written.
If only there was another way for all these things without all the bad which seems to go along with the good.
But without the bad things, how would we recognise all the good things so well.
I thoroughly enjoyed your post. Well done.
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wow
u do good on this stuff! -
is there another way??
i havent found one yet
great poetry,, keep it up!!
darkest love
erica
xx
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Love it! Keep up the great work
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