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Congratulations



Congratulations,
in a heartfelt way,
for you have touched us all,
in your own special way.

Congratulations,
for all that you have done,
as you brighten up the site,
just like the shinning sun.

Congratulations,
in the passage of time,
for all the words you shared,
for all the words that rhyme.




















































































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Congratulations to a very special person.

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  • Bad Bill
    October 16, 2008

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    The repetition of "congratulations" effectively reinforces the theme. Good one.

    Best of luck,
    Bill


  • Symphony
    October 15, 2008

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    Short but sweet, and I like the 'congratulations' theme that runs through it best wishes in teh contest


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    A lovely dedication and celebration you have penned here hun.
    Good luck in the contest
    Best wishes
    Julie


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    These words are just wonderful dearest, and I hope she enjoys them too. from me to you.

    Joann


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    Thank you...

    These words from your heart really mean a lot, Karl, and I'd like to say I really appreciate having you as a friend, mentor, and fellow poet on this site. Thanks again! Peace, Cyn

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