they say nobody is perfect.
but i have to disagree.
when its impossible to smile.
your the perfect imagery.
when i cant find comfort.
i just need to see your perfect face.
when i feel empty.
my fingers run through your perfect soft hair draped like lace.
when i feel lost.
your perfect warmth makes me safe.
when i think im without love.
i think of all the perfect moods you gave.
when i cant breathe.
its because my breath you always take.
as long as i can feel you,
ill be okay knowing that its fake.
Author notes
This is my most recent poem, as of October 14, 2008. And my favorite, at the moment.
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This is a great compassionate poem, deep and sad yet theres a hidden something i can't pinpoint. Great work!
I really like this!! Great poem
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Thanks so much for your comment :]
That was really sweet of you to offer your comfort and compassion.
Everyone goes through hard times,
unfortunately.
But I may take you up on that offer.
If you ever want to talk, about anything, lemme know!
--Calyn
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