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Autumn Falls

Chilled winds
Blow warm colored leaves
Across the dry honey grass
Soft clouds float across
The golden sunset as
Autumn falls
As the cruel cold winter
Chases it slowly away

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  • katzeyez
    October 15, 2008

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    Just beautifulI love the lines 'As the cruel cold winter
    Chases it slowly away'
    Wonderful imagery.
    Thank you and good luck.
    Katz xx