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Never turned back (a no caps poem)


what if, what if i never turned back?
what if its about realizing the good times,
dismissing the bad?
what if im making a huge mistake?
but what if this is for the better?

as i walk down the hallway,
i contemplate.

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  • The Fun House gold member
    October 27, 2008
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    ah life is full of queries and questions…… and you have captured this confusion well in your poem. Never knowing what is the right thing to do or if it is wrong, or what the consequences of any actions we might or might not take. Life is like that all the way through, though as you get older and more experienced the answers seem a little easier a lot of the time.
    Well written.
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    I think that we as people always need to move forward of we turn back we have lost an important part of life that we need to live