A friend is kind,
and Caring.
There considerate,
and repairing.
They know when your mad,
and know when your feel crappie.
They know when your sad,
and when your happy.
They remember your birthday,
and don't tease you when you can't stand it,
They include you,
and don't let you quit.
They love you,
and the blend with you well.
They know you weaknesses and flaws,
and know when you excel.
They are great,
and fun.
There weird but, you fit in anyway,
and you feel like you've won!
If you have a friend you probably agree!
Author notes
I hope you like it! This is what I think a friend should be and more!
For ten thousand cicadas-contest!
21 lines! I hope you friend comes back!
A contest entry
- FITTED COVE—A Friendship Themed Contest to honor Bunny, Cupcrazy by ten thousand cicadas.
3000 points, ended October 15, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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cute
it is serious and funny
they know when you feel crappy
and when your feeling happy
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Thank you I absoulty LOVED IT.
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hello,
I know I'm not a perfect friend...But I don't think I'm terrible either.I agree with the poem almost all the way through.I thought i should say,when you sit alone,witch you haven't lately and I'm glad about that,I don't sit with you because...Well the people at the first table are.....interesting.I've had bad experiences with them.Let's leave it at that.I WANT to come and make you feel better,but when your gone I'm trying to keep the group TOGETHER.I don't want us to break up,and act like the clicks at school who find it amusing to take sides and break up.I don't want us to be that group.We all should talk it it out sometime...In a nice way,of course.Because I've been in one of those groups once.One of those take sides break up groups.I had to find a group where I felt like I fit in.I went to Rachel W.'s group,it was OK,but....Just not a every day kinda group.That's when I remember when I was friends with Sophie,back in the 3rd grade.We always had fun,and back then,my group was breaking up because KT Jo wanted to play
with billy and them,instead of us.I was left with Emily Sykes.Later I meet Sophie,and we became mild friends.I don't know what happened,but 4th grade came,and we didn't talk any more.So when I sat there in the the 5th grade,I felt included.And It felt nice.So MAybe you will have to take that journey I did,If ya want.Other wise you can stay with us.Do what ya want...Great write,openeyes.
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Your still my friend that's why I sit with you!
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YAAA!I'm glad,I didn't want cha to be mad at meh!YAAAY!
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and by the way, do you consider yourself to do every thing you wrote about? You aren't very considerate when i'm down. When I found out my grandpa had cancer you acted like you couldn't care less. You don't know when i'm sad or mad and write now in case your wondering i'm pretty mad at you for writeing and hinting about how terrible a friend I am. Well you never had to be my friend in the first place if you hate me so much!!! I won't message any more advice to you if you don't care to listen to it. The least you could have done is thought about how I was trying to help you repair this relashonship with us ( yeah, that's right it's not just me) but if you don't want it i guess i'll just stop giving it!:{ Any way (unlike you) i'm not going to send you anymore so called "hurtful" messages and move on with my life as you have so failed to do.
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I didn't even know you Grandpa had cancer! You NEVER acted sad!
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if you don;t like us you don't have to sit with us or do anything you don't want to with us. If you hate us so much why do you even take the time to drop all these obnoxious HINTS!!
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You can easyly tell how I feel in them so there NOT hints!
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I totally agree, I am working on being a better friend though!
Good one!Good luck!
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This is just lovely dear. I am so glad you have such a beautiful understanding of true friendship. I'm sure Bunny truly enjoyed this. It has touching moments, and lines that make me smile. Wonderfully done. Thank you!
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