You were writing on my retina:
I read you when you spelled my name
in sunlight rays:
"My Sun"
I poured me over you
- good mellow wine -
which fired deep-rooted desire:
"Drink me, Beloved"!
"Why do you ask me that"?
(you sounded slightly mad ...)
"You know you're mine"
Then you left me
in that forgotten goblet
where I lost my taste ...
And now I scribble
Love in sediment
and shame
myra
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Written March 2nd, 2002
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Fabulous imagery!! Bombay is right....... where in the heck did you get that title? This is a very different cool write. Don
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Oh, thanks CL! I am grateful ...
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...yes, with a Rumi like aura...love it-just love it!
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Myra: TY for visiting my work too!
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...you were writing on my retina--the title alone is classic!
the piece just shines with creativeness,
you have a finesse for expressing deep thought! -
I honestly can't think of anything to say that no one has said already. Brilliant is all I can think of.
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Your work has an aura about it, like that of Rumi's, classical beauty and like all say, great imagery. Thank you for sharing it.
Mike -
Very touching.. great imagery.
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Thank you aiwaz ... thanks slagman.
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Neat arrangement...scribbled words in sediment...conjures up an awesome image.
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oh myra, the emotional impact of this poem leaves me quiet...love in sediment...very quiet...
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Thank you scatcatblu ... I'll return the visit.
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thanks gecko ... you amazingly oratorical lizard!
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forlorn - beautifully written - such wonderful metaphors *sigh*
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agreed Myra
do we not all have this
this is exceptional again dear lady
put
then the vast majority of what you pen is -
Yes, chasing, we all have our sediment ... our tears ...
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ohhhhhhhhhhhh :o(
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