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Escape

8months Strong for nothing

Desperate for an escape

Escape of any kind

The Woman turns away and with blind eyes doesn't witness the deceit of her only daughter.

Familys tight for cash it doesn't matter

All that matters is that renewed first high

The poison melts into a puddle of defeat

Her lips tremble as they meet the glass

A familiar feeling that is yet so new

She twists the glass that incases her past

As she inhales the toxic fumes she inhales in every trouble and broken spirit

Of every user before and after her

The same poison that drove a close friend mad

Gives her a sense of being

Reassurance that she can still feel

That she is still alive

But as she feels her whole body tingle

From her head to her toes

All that she has confirmed is that the girl who she once was

Was nothing more then a distant memory

With every lie

With every act of betrayal

Along with every tiny bag that contains the reflective solid

Although she will never admit it

She knows

That

She is sleeping with public enemy 1.

She is dead to the world she once loved and embraced.

Do you think she found her escape?

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  • Whoa...this was powerful my favorite line was "The poison melts into a puddle of defeat"


  • NeverRegret
    October 19, 2008
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    wow i love this i really feel u. I like how u put tht she was upset tht the person was doing it again and know what shes doing it is going to get her in some trouble. And to answer our Q, if she got clean again she didnt find it but inhalants her mistake hopefully. But if she werent to make then sadly yes but the one im sure she didnt want and any else. great poem i really liked it!
    bailey