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Gone. . .

Death hath claimed me,
Stolen me away,
It hath claimed me,
So please just go away,
I know i did wrong,
I know i screwwed up,
But to give me one chance,
I'd do anything to make it up. . .

But i know i cant,
The chances are small,
SO i give up,
I bid farewell to you all. . .

Im sorry to everyone i hurt, I will never forget what i did and i will forever be sorry

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  • xtayzerx
    March 31

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    um right...

    that was interesting......err...yeah....erm maybe you cold work just a little on the flow.....but whatever....

    ella

  • Devilkid
    November 4, 2008
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    wow

    that waz amazing


  • dove94
    October 14, 2008

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    aw, if those people you claim you hurt really care about you, they will forgive you.
    whatever you did, they will forgive you

    great poem by the way
    =]

  • Devilkid
    October 14, 2008
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    omg omg

    that was brilliant