Soft whispers of "kiss" swims through da winds and flows through ma ears
as I close me eyes enchanted by your spell and your hands caress ma face
as I anticipate the soft texture of your soft, full luscious lips upon ma own.
Ma heart begins to pace, race & elevate at da knee weakening taste
of your tender, supple kiss meltin me into a puddle of bliss
as u take in ma bottom lip and bite gently, pull slowly & suck seductively
as your hands run slowly down ma face, ma neck, down ma chest,
over ma ribs and up ma back as u embrace me within your caress.
"I love u" & I feel so blessed as I begin to run ma tongue slowly
across your bottom lip, & slowly across da top
as u take ma tongue in to dance with yours.
Rice and flowers fall around us like endless confetti
as cheers and wedding bells bring us back to earth so we can finally
walk 2gether down this aisle of forever.
A contest entry
- Write Me A Poem!!! How Hard Is That? by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended October 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was cute. I Like the line with the kiss comming in the ear and out. I think you should try focusing on your though. Try to make the picture a new imagery. Something different because the [picture form} like a painting is what stays in a readers head espeacially for poetry since this an art literacy. As always like your "rhythmic" style of work. You don't try to speak all proper but because of that you are going to have bring out more new thoughts and ideas. Its just too simple for me but nice work. You seem to always get the message out their and some feeling.
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A sweetly flowing piece of adoration and passion, however this could have been so much more poetic without the 'chat speak' (per rules). Thank you for your entry!
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Oh yea, the chat speak, I am so sorry lol. Ma bad.
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