Sweet golden one look outside
that full bodied moon is rising across the sky
seeking lovers hidden amongst the clouds
darken black patches of dispair cannot
hide the love and softness we have for
each other.
let them and try and take it,
I dare them to even try
I gave you up so long ago,
my sin not yours.
I love you darling and always will,
kiss me one last time arms around me
the sky is opening to shine your
soft white glow around me.
I miss the twinkle eye and
sweet lips that once caress my cheek.
I love you
will never forget you.
Does it relate?
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So beautiful, so wonderful! I love this.
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Beautifully Intoxicating!!
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terrific
This fine poem proves that you are an old/young
romantic...Well done.
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Thank you kindly.
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POIGNANT!
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A passionate written poem full of regret and hope at the same time. Well done and well said.
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A thought that just came to me in a moment of loneliness.
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A delightful read indeed.
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Like it!
The beginning is very good, and I like to where it leads.
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very heart warming! I too thought of it as a goodbye.
sometimes you have no choice but to let one go.
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awww
Aww this was so sweet it does however sound like a good-bye poem
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hm, very sweet indeed, as to your question, well i cant relate because this is more like a goodbye poem.. or atleast it sounded that way to me, and i am not ready to say goodbye to my love yet.. probably never will though : )
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Wow, a very colorful & touching piece.
Was it inspired by the picture above your name?
Seems very fitting to it. Thanks for sharing
such a beautiful write
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