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beauty of all discription

Beauty of all description
Your the angle of my hearts definition
I am the patient and your the prescription
I think about you all day long
Your like my favorate love song
The fellings I have for you
You'll never know
And now I say good bye
You are the apple of my eye
And as I put down the pen
I sit here and sigh once again

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  • PerfectImperfection
    October 14, 2008

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    An interesting piece of thought you have penned here. thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!

    [[Title: "discription" = description; "I am the patient and your the prescription" = you're (not trying to pick just helping)]]


  • Canadamomma
    October 14, 2008
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    Beautiful
    Good luck in the contest

    • srabbit
      October 14, 2008
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      thanks

      I appreciate the applauds. Can you please leave a comment on what I may need to change