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Unbreakable

Put me down all you want
Make me feel like dirt
Because I know a simple thing
There's no way I can hurt

You tell me that I'm ugly
Or that I don't belong
Well, all I have to say to you
Is you are very wrong

I know I'm not a model
And I don't want to be
Since being bold and beautiful
Just really isn't me

Maybe you're just jealous
Or maybe you are cruel
But you can't hurt me since I know
One very simple rule

"Being 'cool' and 'special'
Does not mean being rude
It means that you are just yourself
With your own attitude"

So trust me when I say this
"My attitude is stable"
You can "hurt" me all you want
But I am still unbreakable

Author notes

Umm..well, there's not much to say about this one, I was just really bothered by some of the people at my school that think they are so much better than everyone else and they treat people who are different like they are just there....they have no purpose in life, they're just here so that "cool" people can make fun of them...so, yeah here it is

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  • Dreamer42morrow
    October 15, 2008
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    AMEN, BROTHER!!!!

    ^^^all there is to say. =D

    ~Mariah!~


  • cbsbecm88
    October 14, 2008

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    i love this poem! it is so true! it's amazing! it reminds me of my own poetry! great job!
    good luck! thanks for entering!


    • rayraystingray23
      October 15, 2008
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      thanks so much! that's really a compliment if it reminds you of your poetry, yours is AMAZING!!! =)