love doesn't always make us happy but we are always happy to make love
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Inspired by a rainbow
A contest entry
- Throw me a line by Lavender Butterfly.
700 points, ended October 15, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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That could definitely lead to a poem. As Keats said, "my heart leaps up when I behold a rainbow in the sky."
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Debatable :D
Hmmm... You speak of life and wisdom.
At times I would agree with you and in others I would disagree.
True, love doesn’t always make us happy, it’s an emotional rollercoaster, never seems to stop, never rests and full of so many unpredictable turns.
Making love always makes us happy?
Not if your unhappy.
Making love is a mixture of passion, lust, love, security, and mutual happiness.
At least that’s my personal definition or perception I shall say.
But, I bet you speak for so many people out there;
You made a bold and intelligent statement.
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lol well maybe i should have said fucking
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HAHAHAHA!
That's so, SO clever and bluntly stated.
It's very you.
My only nitpick is I HATE poem titles called 'untitled'. It's like a bad oxymoron.
This piece of cleverness needs a title.
I hope you win something, because this is sooo...witty.
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Jessica
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Love brings sweet peace but making love is an exceptional piece
sorry had to do it
Loved your one liner
(kind of like a quickie, short and sweet)
Always
Passions
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that's so totally on
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LOve
LOved this one sheltered... Concise and to the point and very thought provoking.
Id maybe change don't to dosen't though.Just a thought
Take care,
Lillianna
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I like the suggestion. Thanks.
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