A moon reflected on the water
Confuses the man with impaired vision.
Walking toward the replica results in his death.
Loving the true vision makes flying possible.
A light in a gloomy tunnel
Confuses the man with impaired vision.
Running toward the brightness results in a quick defeat.
Cherishing the safety of the darkness guarantees a delightful future.
A beautiful flower
Confuses the man with impaired vision.
Smelling its sweet sent is sure to handicap life.
Staying with the budding tree is positive to conclude in bliss.
A contest entry
- Write Me A Poem!!! How Hard Is That? by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended October 28, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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Although this doesn't rhyme, it's a regular form, which I enjoyed, especially the repetition of the line "Confuses the man with impaired vision."
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"Cherishing the safety of the darkness guarantees a delightful future."
How very true that line is, hiding away emulates safety in most.
Great luck in the contest
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A thoughtful piece of perception penned from the distant eye. The repetition works well for effect, and allows a smooth voyage into thought. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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