sitting here in silence
yet my brain is screaming
so loud i'm sure that
they all can hear it clearly
they're just ignoring what they are hearing.
sitting here, headphones in my ears
my musics blaring to block them out
my head is aching from so many thoughts
my body is trembling.
last nights cuts too deep
her words keep replaying in my head.
now tears are beginning to fall
they streak my clean face
and dampen my once dry cheeks
i'm sitting here in silent pain
A contest entry
- Write Me A Poem!!! How Hard Is That? by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended October 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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The silent pain felt by so many in their march through life.. penned so well here...best to you in contest.


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sadly written; "her words keep replaying in my head."
Well penned
good luck in the contest

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A pained piece of somber heights. Music is often a tool to rescue the drowning mind, and one I use whenever I can. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!



