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silent pain

sitting here in silence

yet my brain is screaming

so loud i'm sure that

they all can hear it clearly

they're just ignoring what they are hearing.



sitting here, headphones in my ears

my musics blaring to block them out

my head is aching from so many thoughts

my body is trembling.

last nights cuts too deep



her words keep replaying in my head.

now tears are beginning to fall

they streak my clean face

and dampen my once dry cheeks



i'm sitting here in silent pain

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  • Rclane gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    The silent pain felt by so many in their march through life.. penned so well here...best to you in contest.


  • Canadamomma
    October 14, 2008
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    sadly written; "her words keep replaying in my head."
    Well penned
    good luck in the contest


  • PerfectImperfection
    October 14, 2008

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    A pained piece of somber heights. Music is often a tool to rescue the drowning mind, and one I use whenever I can. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!