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A Memory

Dark nights and a trembling heart,
driving out to visit you.
Sticky sweat and dripping passion,
words that stuck to my tongue.

An encounter on a lonely day,
the sunshine standing between us.
Blaring music into my soul,
lyrics etching my story.

Standing nervous before the glass,
trying on so many new faces.
Bright, and glowing, and sick with nerves.
Closing my eyes to a different song.

Hope unwrapped in my blooming heart,
Always a tear on the edge of my eye.
Warmth among the frosted icicles,
and a memory to keep forever.

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  • Shantti
    October 14, 2008

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    Sweet, and something I'm sure we can all identify with.
    I don't understand how the sun can stand between you guys though, but I'm just a sun lover and can't see it standing between anyone I really wouldn't change anything. Sweet writting.