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My New Book

My new book
Has a great look
I found it in the store
And I bought it for
My poetry
Can't you see
How wonderful
And not dull
It is to me
And what it can be?

Author notes

Something I wrote a decade ago, so please pardon the crappiness.

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  • this was a great poem and even for one of your first poems this was great keep that pen flowing i hope to be friends so i can read more of your poems what color was your book what did it look like


  • loftymnd
    December 19, 2008

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    great.

    The first poem I have read here in a long time.I sit in a cancer center at Dartmouth hospital and am newly cancer free and this is the poem I picked first.I wouldnt have it any other way.This poem is sweet simplicity.Something I havent had in awhile.TY