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She deserves roses

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Wrapped in the shield of miracle
is healing not by chance
and angels who spin 'round about
with every circumstance
Elixir balm to soothe the pain
and wipe all fears away
For friendly words are ever heard
with lovely things to say

We hold you up to heavens high
and ask the Lord above
to give you comfort constantly
in flood waters of love
So sister dear, I am sincere
in prayer that lifts you now
I know that you're already blessed
and I know you know how
















Author notes

I pray that you are strengthened and healing happens in God's time and yours.

~Poetryality~ (Renee)

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  • Desire gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    Precious~

    Oh My Word another Gem to Inspire and lift Spirits Tight rhyme~ flowed- rolled right off the tongue...
    How can one not feel Happiness and Healing after inhaling Your elixir~ Beautiful!!
    Love this and You Grammy!!~

    Congratulations on Your trophy win!!
    Wooooooo Hoooooooo!!
    (throws some serious confetti)

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • angelica silver member
    October 25, 2008

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    Congratulations my dear Angel Sister on your SILVER trophy for your lovely prayer for Edna.
    Love Joan


  • Yemassee gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    Congratulations on the silver. I would have won except my poem sucked. Is that any excuse not to vote for me?


  • Blankscreen2222
    October 23, 2008

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    I think this should be whispered softly to match the words.
    It's really beautiful.



    Georgina


  • lordoftherings gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    This is so universal in the words....and yet also so personal. Beautiful prayer Renee.

    Gregg


  • gaze
    October 22, 2008

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    This is really something we need to hear when feeling ill.
    A lovely prayer that has a special warmth that comes from the heart.
    The lines flow so nicely with the rhymes you used here making the message of best wish read even more beautiful.

    Big hugs and love,
    Mari


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    October 20, 2008

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    Jenelda said it perfectly, it was a beautiful prayer, with the subtlety that the moment required. It looks like your prayers were answered for the last I heard Edna was doing better (besides the ankle.)


  • jenelda silver member
    October 19, 2008
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    Dear Renee, Oh my, a beautiful prayer for Edna to read.
    Jen


  • Maureen silver member
    October 18, 2008

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    Dear Renee,

    A very lovely poem for Edna to read and savor!

    Love and Best Wishes!
    ♥ Maureen

    P.S.: The rose is quite lovely, too!


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 18, 2008

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    excellent~

    Welcome to our group sis
    This is a beautiful poem
    Best of luck in the contest
    Love the pic too
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • MargaretG
    October 18, 2008

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    Beautiful and tender

    Thank you for joining us Renee, you have added to the wishes with your wonderful style and generosity. I love this image, "give you comfort constantly
    in flood waters of love". Constantly!
    The verse is perfectly lovely, I would not change a thing.


  • Hinemoa silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    Dear Renee, A beautiful prayer for Edna.
    I have seen her ankle bad, but not as bad as it seems to be now, she's always had relief from it before, so I hope they operate on it soon.
    Love Hine


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    October 17, 2008
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    WHAT A LOVELY PRAYER


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    "...angels who spin 'round about..."


    Oh, what an image to cheer one on,
    shimmery angel wings spinning and turning
    to attend to one's needs!

    Perfect!

    M-C


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 15, 2008
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    This is absolutely beautiful. I love it sis!!!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Beautiful scenes are painted vividly as you weave your imagery through the sentimental words for healing and recovery for Edna...Your warm heart comes through each line along with your faith to bring faith and love to her...Magnificent!


  • angelica silver member
    October 15, 2008
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    Very lovely prayer for Edna my dear Renee.
    Your words will bring comfort to her and help with the healing.
    Love Joan


  • catz Moderators member
    October 14, 2008

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    Ahhh, such a lovely poem and prayer for Edna. How could she not get better after reading this

    Very beautiful thoughts, Sis and I wish you good luck in the contest

    Dee


  • hugh wyles silver member
    October 14, 2008

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    Dear Renee,

    Thankyou for entering these words of prayer, comfort and healing in our contest.
    I am printing out all these 'get-well' messages for Edna who is keeping them in a special folder which I've given her. I can assure you that they are all giving her much pleasure and are deeply appreciated.
    Good luck in the voting.
    Love and hugs, Hugh (R.)


  • arafura gold member
    October 14, 2008
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    Beautifully penned. Just as I have come to expect from you my talented friend.


  • libithina
    October 14, 2008

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    These are healing words indeed my friend .. I certainly took them to my heart ~
    s s

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