screeching storms,
stalled,
calm seas reign
Author notes
Prompt : six words
Libithina ~ Amaranthine Lover
A contest entry
- Six Words by still.she.waits.
300 points, ended October 20, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Prewrites From October 2008 by amaranthine lover.
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Please tell me what you think
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Simply lovely. Short and to the point (:
Your imagery was beautiful.
Thanks for sharing your work.
Great job (:
-Kati Anne -
short and sweet
x Ju x
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I like the shortness of it.
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Excellent
Such a great choice of six words. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wow. I never understood how people can so easily sum up all what they feel in just a few words. You did a great job. Pure brilliance I must say.
Great work!
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To me its like insanity held back while serenity prevails. A wonderful goal.
Patty
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Oh, how wonderfully expressed Patty
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Many thanks
Lib x x
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don't they though....I am the storm....the world the calm sea....watch me rile them a bit...
great piece!
Smile♫
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Sounds like they had better watch out
Love the spirit of that
s
Smiles back at you
Lib x x Many thanks
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Oh me too Cyn, I love to walk by the sea with the waves rolling in, feeds the soul
s thankyou for your warm words s Lib x x x
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Brilliant!!
I love the sea, and all poems related to the ocean just draw me in for a li'l soul rejuvenation. I couldn't have said what you have in six words any better than in this awesome piece!! Best of luck in the contest!! Peace, Cyn
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