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Decieve My Blackened Eyes

Night draws curtains over the sun light
Black velvet envelopes the evening rays
The moon creeps up the starry stairway
Emanating a phosphorus glow, devouring the land
Time decays in a bewildering spell
Incantations form in the midnight fog
Shadows slice through frozen hearts
Drip, drop goes the spirit
Breaking their way through drooling minds
Hold that nightmare, inhale one last whisper
Open
Deceive my blackened eyes
And fly right through me

Author notes

i wish i knew where i was going, it just kinda came out that way

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 15, 2008

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    Thank You for Entering

    Wow! a very impressive methaphorical write here for my contest. from start to finish you really penned this well. the strong methaphortical useage really attracted myh attention a sit sets the poem into motion and it was an increidble motion at that. excellent detailing nice wording and impressive. good work and good luck