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6. Your Touch.

6. If you love me, let me know. If not, please gently let me go


As the raindrops mix with tears,
I'm alone, and confused
walking away, it's one my biggest fears.

Friends for years on end, and how are you to know?
These feelings I have for you are not the same,
I really have to tell you, but unsure how to show,

So as you take my hand in kindness,
and make my problems solved,
I admire you, your life, fearless.

Your touch leaves me longing, needing to know..

If you love me,let me know. If not, please, just gently let me go.

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  • dabpunx
    October 14, 2008

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    very good.

    i love the flow and the bittersweet atmosphere you create. i see.. you dont want to be led on, you want to know where this person stands so you don't have to wonder. you will find everything you look for.