Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

[Between twilights]

Contrasting state of minds the beast within is awakened
One more adventure, once more at the time of uncertainty
Her throat begs for a drink
Something to cure the strong craving that’s alive again

His weakened heart and poor condition only lead him to the sacrifice
She cannot wait for it’s been too long
The need for the taste of the liquid so sweetly rusty

With just one break in the skin
And no time for pity in his destruction
The ooze of bloodletting becomes excessive
Destined to a forever life but he breathes no more

A contest entry

41. http://ukraine-photo.deviantart.com/art/Bloody-Sunset-22227457

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • newnoakua
    October 14, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Please put which option you're reserving in your notes. Thank you...