Silent pain

You hear screaming
Sobbing
You look around,
No one is near.
Is sounds like a dying, agonized pain
Like a heart being ripped apart
Where is it coming from?
You listen closely,
Oh it's just....
me
The silent tears
The silent fears
The silent screams
You can hear them

day and night
But no one else cares

no one else sees
Push them away
It's too late now
The silence is burning you
from the inside out

A contest entry

Silence by Lislaine. 600 points, ended October 16, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Give ME EMOTION by Violent Glass. 700 points, ended January 29, 101 entries
Honorable mention
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Violent Glass
January 25
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WOW this is amazing
i loved it
and i can so relate to it
great job
i really did love it!
Lislaine
October 14, 2008
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WAAAWW one of my favorites till now!! I love it! Goodluck
Bob Fox
October 14, 2008

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Silence
Often the silince is a deadly agonizing roar. But tears of hope can wash the silence away. Nice work young poet.