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Free At Last

Come, let me whisper in your ear
Urges overwhelm me whenever you're near
My intentions are only most sincere
I promise to show you if you scoot over here
Oh, please don't ever leave

So much inside I want to share
As I run my fingers through your hair
Together we'd make such a wonderful pair
Feelings like these are awfully rare
I can't imagine why you'd ever leave

Just you and me in a world of our own
Hand in hand walking into the unknown
With you I want to wander and roam
Before we settle down back at home
And I know you'll never leave

Two of a kind, don't you see
I love you and you love me
My heart was locked, but you hold the key
Your love has finally set me free
I'm glad you didn't leave




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  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    It is always lovely to see a quad. I can of course see no reason why anyone would ever leave a poet!

  • Judith Chandler
    October 16, 2008
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    Nice love poem.


  • feetus
    October 14, 2008
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    I really like this one. It finishes with a smile.