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I've hit Rock Bottom

A sea of black envelops my eyes
And the long silence fills my ears un-plentifully 

Accessional I hear them weep desperately for hope
The hope that is absent in this pale cemetery

Hold my hand, make it better
Kiss my cheek; bring the life back to me
Whisper to me softly, that this is all a dream

But its not, cause I’m here in this grave yard
Witnessing the ceremony of death

Witnessing this horrifying terror as your
Body lowers into the ground

Then it happens slowly and painfully
Your coffin his the bottom of the grave with a thud
And then they bury you

I lost my heart the moment they but you in the ground

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though, i didn't go to your funeral, i can imagine it...

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  • Author Unknown
    October 15, 2008
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    Awww

    omg this is so sad. lots of emotion and it's just beautiful but sad. loved it.


  • lemonhead
    October 14, 2008
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    Im sorry... Maybe its better if you dont imagine it.


  • Psychoninja
    October 14, 2008
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    ....im srry