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I was never really well, and when I was, I was sick.

A fragile mind alive with adjacent voices,
maliciously aware of the others,

forever bound by flesh.

Repossession , a jousting battle;
constantly at war.
Fear trickling through veins,
an enormous highway of emotions constantly speeding;
as to who will inhabit a sieved mind.

Synthetically anesthetized,
producing lucid moments of wholeness;
as tears defile a weeping heart,
betraying deep emotional turmoil.
Humanity alive once again,
inside an aching soul crying for release.

Mammoth hands suffocate a entity,
of painstaking consciousness,
smothering the only human connection,
driving a nail deeper into emptiness.
Saneness a temporary relief;
as the band aid is crudely extracted.

Spiraling back deep inside a prison,
competency abruptly imprisoned once again,
in a straight jacket of anarchy.

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 19, 2008
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    hehehe niceness, i loved this spin of darkness
    lovely take on my prompt and good luck
    Stephanie ♥


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    WOW sissy this is absolutely incredible. Extremely dark, the imagery is also very dark and its very deep. I personally love the last stanza.. "straight jacket of anarchy" excellent imagery. WOW!!

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    hehe, okay

    prompt is also your title:

    I was never really well, and when I was, I was sick.

    haha....if you dont get it i'll explain, if you need soemthing else, just ask =)