Do you want to see my world?
With all its beauty abound?
From the trees in the forests,
to the caverns underground.
Amongst great beasts in the wild,
and elegant creatures of the sea.
Not forgetting the microscopic,
and other things unseen.
On gusts of wind that carry,
the time that passes all we know.
The reminders of a place,
To which we all do want to go.
This is the world around me,
the world in which I know.
This is my world.
Where do you want to go?
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I thought I would ask the opinion of the members on this site, but it appears several members were too busy being so far up themself that they could not lower their arrogance enough for constructive feedback. but instead would choose to belittle, and attack a writing not of their own.
Thanks AllPoetry!

