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All I Desire

For the touch of your skin,
My heart does yearn.

For the time we will share,
A passion will burn.

You are all I could want,
And all I desire.

My feelings for you,
Burn through me like fire.

You are the angel,
that lifts my heart higher.


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  • TimeMeddler
    October 14, 2008
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    just realised.. that last part doesnt really flow that well....

    anybody else have some thoughts to share?