Passing my reflection in a plate glass window, I paused to consider my figure. My clothing modestly revealed my curvaceous little half-pear shape, opposite a clean, straight line. Something struck me as being amiss. I looked again, studying more carefully. Then it dawned on me. “Dang! I’ve got my butt on backwards!”
Author notes
Prompt: humorous short story in 55 words or less
A contest entry
- Stories- SHORT!!! sweet, and to the point... by worshipchick.
760 points, ended October 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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lol! gorgeous, a quick glimpse that tells so much.
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Oh wow lol. Short and fast that you freeze for a moment when it ends. Very decisive and good for a laugh. great job
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Hilarious! Especially from you, my dear! I find this to be great fun!
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TOO funny!
It starts so gently and casually as you stroll in front of the mirror before turning a sharp 90-degree angle! I liked this enormously, Girl!
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so funny. so good
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Ha! Ha! This is too cute and too funny. What a unique poem you have penned here. Thanks much for the laugh! Blessings, Patty
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Hehe, great write! I enjoyed this a lot. I wasn't sure where you were going with it, so great ending. Thanks for entering!
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nice one! I like the windows that make me look skinny. Those are the only ones I look in! Great story! I love it. Good luck in the contest!
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I just had a day like that.
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Love it Mirthryl
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I can see myself in this as my sedentary butt loses ground to my protruding paunch... do women have paunches?
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