Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Withdrawing

Going through what's hard to go through
It hurts, trembles
The reverse of what I have done
Cold than hot, sweats
Forced sleep
And wake again, what time?
Time is so surreal
Spacey, looks like everyone is watching me
Dreams are neon colored sand dissolving into t.v. fuzz
And one single dance move wipes a whole galaxy away
And begins something anew
I try and show others the way, but behind the door things have changed
Achy in some chaotic stupor
I dream the importance of flipping my body upon my bed
Again with neon sand dissolving and reappearing, I awake dizzy
Where everything is still quite unreal and a breeze feels more than welcome

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • funny girl
    November 2, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    very good

    It is always worthy to try again from the beginning. The moments you describe so greatly will pass. After all those are only moments. True happiness is just knokcing to your door. Just listen!


  • transcendental baby gold member
    October 15, 2008
    Edit | Reply


  • PerVirtuous
    October 14, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Hang in there. Detachment is a hard lesson. One day you realize you will never know the answers. Then after the dissapoinment wears off, you realize you get to choose your lies! YAY! Self-determination after all. If you choose your lies wisely, you may take several steps closer to actual truth.

    Love Always
    Allan