Chocolate covered fingertips
my face becomes a smile
licking lips with tastebuds
confection to beguile.
Rainbow coloured boxes
a smoothness to delight
forget that fated diet
feed me some tonight.
Author notes
Prompt - 30 words.
A contest entry
- One winner, two options, ten entries, go. by Chocoholic156.
500 points, ended October 19, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lol! I loved it! You did a GREAT job describing this passion. My favorite part was:
forget that fated diet
feed me some tonight.
most definitely my favorite lines and oh so true.
And I am so glad that you didn't go the usual route when writing poems, showing you have versitility.
I also liked how you only said the word "chocolate" once, which is amazing because some people repeat and repeat the word and ruins the poem, which you did not do! Again, wonderful job. -
Yeah, feed me some too!
Nothing beats a nice chocolate cake.
Well done and good luck to you with
this one here! Great work with your
thirty words!
Jeremy0826
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