I cant believe your gone my son
I feel so lost and on my own
The tears they stain my now pale
Face and my love for life is now eraced
I fight with god most everyday
I blame him son now your away
Nothing eases this constant pain
I fall to pieces when i just hear your name
I look at the photos of you not up to twenty
Your death is so recent but i will never forget you
You were under my heart for nine months in my womb
You will be in my heart till im up there with you
They say that times a healer i hope this to be true
A mothers heart is breaking and i dont know what to do
So sleep my little angel your pain is at an end
Watch over me from heaven till i can hold you once
AGAIN
Author notes
im a munskins apple pie yadi dida oh-so-in-love-with-life
A contest entry
- What Hurts The Most by charmander13.
525 points, ended October 19, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
a mothers love is unconditional once a mother always a mother you keep that love for always and love them for the rest of your life
Comments
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Wow.
I really like it.
It has so much emotion. It's really good!
Your pain is so real, very well written.
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Such real and raw feeling. I can feel you poured your heart and tears in to this poem. This is my life too. You described it well. The disbelief; I think he's going to come down the stairs in the morning. I can't wrap my mind around the fact that he's gone. The anger; I am very angry and comfused with God right now. The emotional, physical, spiritual and mental pain; your right, there is no relief. The memories are treasured but so painful right now. I hope that our boys have met and that is why we have connected. Hope that doesn't sound too far out to you. I have those "heaven" thoughts once in while. They make me smile. Keep on writing! You do a great job of describing your pain, raw emotion and your love for your beautiful son. Look forward to talking to you soon.
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I love this, I really do- your pain is just so unfettered and raw and heartwrenching... god bless your pain.
Yes, only a mother's love is unconditional, and well done for this very fine poem.
Thank you for entering my contest and all the best to you yeah. .
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