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Witch Hunt Little Girl

The sound of bats nipping  in the misty air as they fly over head,
The tree has an eye you see?
Her little finger points at the magic black spell book the witch has
Telling, "Little girl" I have a Delicious red apple for you to eat!
Come with me to my castle beyond the clouds for the night is full of Magic,
I will show you the many frogs I have made from men,
And why I love me bats so much my pretty dear....
Come sweet heart do not fear,
I'll take you for a ride on my broomstick in the rear,
Climb aboard my pretty your family is already there,
We must go now before the midnight hour is near,
Oh, yes my pretty it wont take long,
Before you know it you'll be singing a song,
Ashes ashes we all fall down,
Ring around the roses pocket full of posies,
Ashes ashes we all fall down!


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  • goalsv
    October 14, 2008
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    Very well done, nice and creative. A nice little Halloween tale.


    • ebaby
      October 14, 2008
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      Thanks goalsv its all just fun.... nice of you to read.... Have a wonderful fall season!


  • serenity silvermoon
    October 14, 2008

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    nice poem very creative i love how the word pretty in this it reminds me of a movie called wizard of oz didnt like the movie to much though thanks for sharing